My working thesis for my paper is ". Although there were many movies of it’s kind Rainman seemed to get more attention, better reviews, became better known and turned into the classic it is today."
About My Draft:
I wasn't really sure how to start and introduce my essay, so I'm not entirely sure that the introduction works very well. Also, I wasn't sure how to turn the theme and purpose of my paper into a good, solid, working thesis statement. I'm not sure if the paper flows very well or is organized in a good way. And finally, I know the paper ends very abruptly, that is because I wasn't sure where else to go with the paper, or how to end it at all. I plan to put a lot of work into crafting a better thesis statement, organizing my paper better and finding a way to wrap up my paper and have a nice concluding paragraph.
About My Draft:
I wasn't really sure how to start and introduce my essay, so I'm not entirely sure that the introduction works very well. Also, I wasn't sure how to turn the theme and purpose of my paper into a good, solid, working thesis statement. I'm not sure if the paper flows very well or is organized in a good way. And finally, I know the paper ends very abruptly, that is because I wasn't sure where else to go with the paper, or how to end it at all. I plan to put a lot of work into crafting a better thesis statement, organizing my paper better and finding a way to wrap up my paper and have a nice concluding paragraph.